The SaraLiz Concert: An Erotic Short Story by S.H. Granger

The SaraLiz Concert: An Erotic Short Story Reviews

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  Spidersnare

  It was free on Amazon.
  
  Saraliz is a pop star with tanking public opinions about her. Her manager convinces her to do a meet and greet with a couple of fans. However, it turns out that her manager knows one of them. Saraliz convinces him that he should bang the girl. In order to convince the girl to bang the manager, Saraliz pushes herself onto the girl.
  
  It was a short story, as the title indicated. I enjoyed it a lot.
  
  But I'm taking off a star because I thought that it was kind of creepy how Saraliz pushed herself onto Lisa like that. Lisa was kind of not into it, but only went along with it simply because Saraliz was her favorite singer.
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  Natalie Richter

  I liked the other story by the same author so much, that I decided to try another thing that she'd written. I enjoyed the other, but this one was good because there wasn't anything weird in it! Just a super sexy scene. Too short, in my opinion, but I loved it anyway.
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  Larissa Clary

  I'm honestly not sure that I enjoyed how SaraLiz manipulated the girl into having sex with them. But once the story got going, it was more of Granger's usual goodness.
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  lezara

  The dedication in this book honestly made me stop and stare at the wall for a minute or two. I was so close to exiting out the book and deleting it from my Kindle. If you're wondering why, let me show you,
  
  “For Freckles the cat, She might have stinky kitty farts, but she filled me with purrs while I was working on this.”
  
  What. the. actual. hell?
  
  Then, surprisingly, that wasn’t even the worst part. The book shifts to Tom, the fmc’s friend, Sara, telling her she should do something to show the world she’s a good person since she’s becoming popular. He suggests visiting sick kids in the hospital, and later on, she actually agrees, but with this awful response: “What would you have me do? I don’t want to go anywhere where I could catch... some disease. Just because some kid sneezed on me.” That line was less than five pages in, and I already disliked the fmc. such a great start.
  
  This book honestly just made every girl seem like either an object or some desperate, needy character just pining for Sara. Meanwhile, Sara’s written like she's some kind of goddess that everyone worships. Examples?
  
  “There’s no way that i’m prettier than you, SaraLiz”
  
  “I’m always willing to help out SaraLiz. Shes my hero”
  
  “I only did it because I love SaraLiz so much”
  
  “SaraLiz gives the best orgasms!”
  
  The smut could’ve honestly saved the book if the author hadn't made SaraLiz take Lisa to the room just to get her drunk, and then push herself onto her lisa and manipulate her into doing things she was uncertain of. Lisa clearly wasn’t into it, but ended up going along with it because SaraLiz was her favorite singer and someone she admired. The whole dynamic just made it hard to enjoy the story.