| Title | : | The First Night (Dark Fate, #2) |
| Author | : | |
| Rating | : | |
| ISBN | : | - |
| Language | : | English |
| Format Type | : | Kindle Edition |
| Number of Pages | : | 98 |
| Publication | : | First published June 13, 2020 |
Zayn Greene, using the knowledge he gained from his former life as the Black Knight, a hero who slayed the Demon Lord, has become a demon himself in this new world, hoping to break the chains of fate that bound him in his last life. Now, as the first night falls upon the new world, what will happen to him, and those he chooses to take under his wing?
He may have phenomenal power, but that is only for someone of his level. He will need to get stronger still if he is to be sure of survival. For goblins are the least of the worries this new world has in store.
The First Night (Dark Fate, #2) Reviews
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Darwin awards
You have 12.3 trillion dollars.
That's over 3,000,000. a day, every day for 1000 years.
Three million every single day for a THOUSAND years!
and yet you buy basic upgrades, a few consumables and ignore the rest?
Why not dozens of consumables?!
Why not several vehicles?
Death is permanent, and weightless magic inventories are a thing, why not splurge on consumables?!? Or Extra weapons or armor or vehicles?
Your a slaver!
You collect people!
Slave collars? Nah, I don't need them yet....
When you have enough money to buy a vehicle for EVERY SINGLE PERSON on the planet, why stop at one of each?
The MC has the foresight of a mosquito.
Endlessly OP, the universe magically hands him everything he needs or wants and the system broke in his favor again and again and somehow he is still struggling.
A slaver who puts himself on the front line?
Calling 10 gold steep when you have 12.3 trillion?
Dueling people fairly instead of just stabbing them in the back?
Stopping to shag before you have cleared your AO?
Getting in melee distance when your a caster and again death is permanent??
I desperately hope he dies for the betterment of the human gene pool. Seriously, I have never wanted an MC to die more than I do right now. -
Well Written and Fun, If Short
Pros:
-The world building, character interactions, and combat are well developed and descriptive. -Almost no grammar or mechanics errors while still using a relatively deep vocabulary.
-LitRPG elements, such as stats and items, are clearly displayed and understandable. Also keeps values and information consistent, as opposed to many LitRPGs wherein the author seemingly forgets to update their spreadsheets with their characters' latest changes.
-I feel that the harem members are deliberately acquired and have standalone personalities of their own.
-Big plus for me compared to lots of recent harem lit: it's an actual harem, thus far. Not polygamy or polyamory.
Cons:
- Really short. This issue is compounded upon by how good the book is, so that when you reach the end, you're even more upset because of how little you got if this great story.
- Many issues seem to be a symptom of the story being too short: lack of adult scenes, lack of new harem members' screen time, no plot conflicts were resolved (some harem related conflicts and past life conflicts are, though), and the plot barely advances in any way (short of harem and past life story developing a little). -
Great Continuation
Great characters and story. Hard to put down, looking forward to the next installment. Great world and character development, not for the easily offended -
Same old as book one, new plot holes make way.
