| Title | : | He Was A Wolf In Sheep's Clothing 2 |
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| Rating | : | |
| ISBN | : | - |
| Format Type | : | Kindle Edition |
| Number of Pages | : | 85 |
| Publication | : | Published December 6, 2017 |
He just did not realize he was playing with fire and about to get innocent people burned along with him for the games he was playing. And to top it off, his rich bitch decides to reach out to her with threats of violence. Continuing to lead his prey on; wining and dining her, providing finances, and sexing her down good grew old when lies was steady going out.
Finally, to the point of no return, she touched down and caused destruction. Having to eliminate the enemy and tame a wolf is no easy task, but can she do it? Can she get inside his head so good that he finally gets himself together? It seems that way until he flips the script.
Does the wolf become a better man, or does he betray her and show her how much pull he has? Find out in “He Was A Wolf in Sheep’s Clothing 2.
He Was A Wolf In Sheep's Clothing 2 Reviews
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Oh my gooooooshhhh!
I did not expect part two to be this crazy. Woooow, this is a must read! Read part one first! I’m so shocked. -
It's been a long time since I've had such a negative response to someone's work, especially from someone who clearly has creative talent. But, this is the author and her team did themselves a HUGE disservice allowing this to be published in its incomplete state. The author is better than this.
There was so much wrong with this that I struggled to find anything right with it. I'll preface my comments with my closing statement in book 1. I am one of those people that has to know how a story ends that is the only reason I continued on to book two.
Pros
• the author's creative mind
Cons
• grammatical & spelling errors
• incorrect word usage
• improbable action sequences
• unexplained drama and violence
• lack of continuity
• lack of storyline structure
• lack of character development
• waffling between tense (pick one)
• chaotic delivery
Random
• The title -The incorrect title was chosen for this book (or so it seems thus far). I'm starting to think the “she” is a “he” which would then make the title correct). Thus far the only wolf in the story is Katrina.
• Jamay’s bathroom assault scene-The violence came out of nowhere. Her face was burned to a crisp under her eye, the inside of her mouth was burned and described as “sizzling”. She was savagely beaten to unconsciousness with blood everywhere. Yet, there was no hospital stay and Lucas saw no evidence of the brutal attack.
• The goons –The appearance of the unexplained goons -Are they now both part of criminal organizations?
• The unexplained affront to Katrina's person. Lucas was a player. And this warranted a killing spree and a torture scene? I don't think so.
• Psychotic episodes - Katrina's unexplained psychotic episodes. The behavior needs to be explained. She kept saying that "they shouldn't have messed with me. I'm not the one to be played with." Yet, her character was the only one "messing” with people.
• I wish the story had been wrapped up, but it’s a cliffhanger.
