Forever Vacancy: A Colors in Darkness Anthology by Eden Royce


Forever Vacancy: A Colors in Darkness Anthology
Title : Forever Vacancy: A Colors in Darkness Anthology
Author :
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ISBN : 1542599741
ISBN-10 : 9781542599740
Language : English
Format Type : Paperback
Number of Pages : 280
Publication : First published January 13, 2017

Colors in Darkness, the premiere online site for dark fiction authors of color presents its first anthology!

Amid the upheaval of the 1960s, the Kretcher Motel opened in a poor, desolate part of Atlanta. It still serves its original purpose: to lure those souls who are lost, who are troubled, who are evil…to itself. Check in to view these thirteen dark tales of horror, betrayal, fear, and wickedness, all featuring characters of color. You may never want to leave.

The Thing in Room 204 – C.W. Blackwell

Karma Suture – Tawanna Sullivan

The Last Day of Jerome Brown – Jordan King-Lacroix

Roost – Kenya Moss-Dyme

Salvation – Ross Baxter

The Honeymoon Suite: Jacob’s Reunion – Sumiko Saulson

A Long Way From the Ritz – Eden Royce

Mister Mackintosh – David Turnbull

Flesh Trap – Querus Abuttu

A Devil of a Deal – David O’Hanlon

Hollygraham – Sy Shanti

The Adjusters – Dahlia DeWinters

Need – Zin E. Rocklyn



280 pages


Forever Vacancy: A Colors in Darkness Anthology Reviews


  • N.D.<span class=

    "Forever Vacancy" is a wonderful collection of short, horror stories by an eclectic mix of talented authors. The theme of the anthology is a pretty simple and basic one--people check into the Kretcher Motel but not everyone checks out. Now, what happens to the guests once they check in is where each story takes an interesting and surprising turn. This Colors in Darkness anthology will keep a reader guessing and fully engaged to the last page.

  • David Watson

    The Kretcher Hotel opened it's doors in Atlanta in the 1960's. It's a rundown place in the slums of the city surrounded by prostitutes, drug dealers and any kind of crime you can imagine. Some people say that the Kretcher Hotel was built by the devil himself. Bad things happen there and some say its cursed. In charge of the hotel is Sybline Kretcher, a six-foot 4 woman with a long dark past and a personality that can't be controlled by Satan himself.

    The Kretcher Hotel is a place where anything goes. Within its walls are suicidal men, evil monsters, witches, a succubus looking for redemption, thieves, addicts and any other abominations you can imagine. The Kretcher Hotel is a place surrounded by evil, but people also go there for redemption.

    Forever Vacancy is an anthology of 13 horror stories that all feature diverse characters that you don't see in most horror anthologies. The setting of a broken down hotel is a perfect place for a horror anthology and that comes across loud and clear in the story The Thing In Room 204 by C. W. Blackwell. It begins with a cloaked man being led to the hotel by a mysterious man. There is a mystery as to what is going on here which is made more complicated by the prostitute on the street. Another good story is The Honeymoon Suite: Jacob's Reunion by Sumiko Saulson which is about a grief-stricken man who is trying to make the choice between being consumed by the bitterness of loosing someone, the need for revenge and wanting the chance for forgiveness.

    My favorite story in this book is Salvation by Ross Baxter. This story follows a succubus who wants to find salvation after centuries of taking the souls of men. She goes to a priest for salvation, but is the priest strong enough to resist her and give her the help she needs? What I liked about this one was how offended the priest is when he sees how Sybline acts towards him and how sure he is of himself before being given the ultimate test. I also liked the idea that despite how evil the succubus is, she still hopes to change her ways.

    I loved the concept behind Forever Vacancy. This is a book where each story has the same location and one character in common. I loved how Sybline shows so much depth of character even though she is a small part of each story. In some stories Sybline shows herself as being cold and uncaring but in others she proves that she is helping the protagonists. Sybline may be working for the devil but she has a mind of her own and does as she pleases. Every story in this book is fast paced and filled with gruesome situations in a dark setting. This is the kind of book that all horror fan should read because it's a great example of how good horror stories can be. I would love to see a series of books based on this setting. Despite the desolation of the location there are still souls in search of redemption and that is what makes this anthology good.

  • Mary Thornburg<span class=

    As with any collection of stories, a reader is going to like some better than others, and the writing in a few of these tales is uneven. But for an anthology whose setting is tightly controlled (the Kretcher Motel, a run-down and haunted inn in Atlanta, presided over by Sybline, a truly awe-inspiring woman who threatens to steal every show), there's nothing here that's not original and exciting, and there's so much variety that there's something for every reader. Enter if you dare!


    Mya Lairis, "Introduction"

    The prologue to the collection is itself a piece of short fiction. In it we meet Sybline, a woman who has lived many lives and died many deaths. She's served time in ancient Egypt, in the American South from the sixteenth century to the twentieth, and in hell. She's never bowed her head to anyone or anything. And now, in company with her "silent partner," she holds all the keys to the Kretcher, where guests would be well advised not to sign in with their real names.


    C. W. Blackwell, "The Thing in Room 204"

    If the title of the opening tale seems lightly allusive, it's not so by accident – the story has a Lovecraftian quality, with certain particulars kept masked to draw on the reader's imagination, others revealed suddenly and shockingly. With great economy, Blackwell accomplishes a feat essential to a memorable horror story, creating with selected details a sense of revulsion, pity, and dread, building toward a terrific climax, and at the same time suggesting something much deeper. There's a dark undercurrent here, never stated outright and not at all belabored, but unmistakable: humanity's tragic dual nature – love and hate, innocence and guilt, kindness and violence, bound and struggling within one creature, and the determined attempt at control that's exercised by conscious reason but is probably doomed to fail.

    Tawanna Sullivan, "Karma Suture"

    Stephanie, an aspiring actress whose career hasn't yet prospered, accepts an offer from her ex-boyfriend to work on a film he's been funded to produce. When she finds out he's conned her – he doesn't want her to star, as he's implied, but only to serve as location scout – she decides to go along anyway. It'll strengthen her résumé, she thinks. She tells herself that she's completely over Curtis, who dumped her after he'd taken what he wanted from her, and she doesn't care that he's fooled her about this project, apparently to rub her face in the fact he's got a new fiancée. This isn't true; it's just easier to believe than the truth. Stephanie has a way of lying to herself. She's been telling one big lie for years, and when the terrifying truth of that lie catches up with her in a dingy room at the Kretcher Motel, she has no choice but to give in to her true feelings about Curtis and bring karma around to have its way with him. The horror in this story, when it appears, is truly ghastly, as is the way it will end, which isn't shown but is obvious to both Stephanie and the reader.

    Jordan King-Lacroix, "The Last Day of Jerome Brown"

    Jerome Brown is a man without a future. Or so he thinks. He's come to the Kretcher Motel for a specific purpose, the one thing in his life over which he still has control. Or so he thinks. But at the Kretcher, there's only one person in control, and it's not Jerome Brown. This story is very short and very, very weird.

    Kenya Moss Dyme, "Roost"

    Three young gangsters, apparently in their middle to late teens, have lucked into a hit that has big possibilities, promising a rich haul and a great boost to their status. But something doesn't seem quite right about it. Chico, the leader, feels this even as he needles Jordan and Ronnie into action when he sees them faltering. For one thing, it's a strange neighborhood to them, and strangely dark and silent; for another, he doesn't really know their new companion, Ray, and doesn't really trust him. But he can't do this alone, and he's gotten himself into a situation that means he'll have to do it, with or without the others. So, well-armed, they enter the motel and head for the elevator. Before they can take it, the woman at the desk forces them to tell her where they're going. But here Ray takes over smoothly, and for a while it looks to Chico like everything will go according to plan. We readers have been in this motel before, though, and we know he's wrong. It's another story about karma, karma on steroids this time, with a surprise at the end that's both mysterious and satisfying, even though we may have guessed it might be coming.

    Ross Baxter, "Salvation"

    Ashanti seems to be a beautiful woman in her early twenties, but Ashanti is not what she seems. She has an issue that requires the help of a priest, and while Father Higgs is reluctant to provide it, he sees it as his duty to try. This is probably the wrong decision on his part. Baxter's story is sort of like William Peter Blatty's The Exorcist in miniature. I don't mean it's a story of demonic possession, exactly; it's an original situation, and it moves quickly and provides enough suspense, not to mention enough horror and gore, to satisfy a reader's appetite for these things. But as a reader I had a couple of problems with the story that didn't occur to me until I'd finished it. First, if Ashanti honestly wants only spiritual help from Father Higgs (and there's no indication she has an ulterior motive), why must she take him to a motel—any motel, let alone the Kretcher—to ask for it, when there's plenty of opportunity for privacy in a church or rectory? Second, if Father Higgs is as smart as he's supposed to be, and if he himself doesn't have an ulterior motive (and there's no hint that he does), why isn't he more suspicious of her? Also, as someone who's absorbed quite a lot of Roman Catholic doctrine, I have my doubts about Baxter's theology here (but then, I have my doubts about Blatty's theology in The Exorcist too). But heck, this is fiction, isn't it. Let's just enjoy it with a grain—or maybe a generous half-teaspoon—of salt.


    Sumiko Saulson, "The Honeymoon Suite: Jacob's Reunion"

    A year ago, Jacob was killed in a car-train collision on his way to his tenth high school reunion. He'd invited Jess to go with him, but Jess was afraid they'd not be accepted as a couple, and had declined. Now, still in deep, disabling mourning and full of survivor's guilt, Jess has even attempted suicide, but has decided to travel to Atlanta to meet Jacob's parents for the first time and attend Jacob's next reunion. Too much of Saulson's story is nearly a lecture, part grievance and part sermon, on the values of understanding and tolerance, kindness and Christian love. This is a pity, because the story itself should and could get all this across without the author's telling us how to feel about it. The story is strongest in its moving and accurate depiction of Jess's grief.


    Eden Royce, "A Long Way from the Ritz"

    This tale features two narrative voices, both first-person, both past-tense. The first is the voice of a young woman, Talia, whose marriage turned sour, who needed desperately to escape, and who finally has escaped—almost. The second voice, which gives us parts of Talia's story, is never identified. Written beautifully and with subtle economy, the story gives the reader glimpses of a very real and entirely sympathetic woman and the dark craft she's inherited from her mother and aunts. We don't see everything—some things are not meant to be seen—but Royce handles her material so well that we're never confused and never disappointed.

    David O'Hanlon, "A Devil of a Deal"

    Apparently Lucifer and his underlings—all those other fallen angels—aren't without a few human qualities, including the ability to feel sexual attraction, pain, and even a certain amount of moral outrage. According to the narrator of O'Hanlon's tale, a relatively minor demon called "Scratch," this is the result of going around for eons clothed in human bodies, which they do in order to tempt real humans into making bad decisions. Naturally they prefer well-made bodies in good working order, but in an emergency they have to settle for what's available. One of "Scratch's" human qualities, for sure, is a clever and extremely funny way of telling a story. This one kept making me laugh out loud.


    Sy Shanti, "Hollygraham"

    The Grahams want answers, and Austin Zimmer has an app for that. On his way to a meeting—at the Kretcher, of course—where he'll demo his invention for the couple, Austin has his phone stolen, along with his only copy of the invention. Fortunately (or not? Not!), his wife has backed it up to Austin's laptop. Enough said—any more would be a huge spoiler, and I wouldn't want to spoil this cleverly-titled sci-fi/horror/ghost (ghost?) tale. Except to say it has my favorite kind of ending: you think it's over. But it's not over.


    Querrus Abuttu, "Fleshtrap"

    If you like darkness piled on darkness, sex, blood, and betrayal all served up in a sumptuous feast of horror, Abuttu's story is, um, your meat. Personally, I prefer things a little more spare—but, being closely related to a man who can watch "Seven" with relish three times in one afternoon, I understand the attraction of tales like this one. Impressively, the author has evoked a veritable Grand Guignol using only the relatively few incidents and details for which there's available room in a short story. And I have to say, concerning its narrator: it couldn't have happened to a more deserving guy.


    David Turnbull, "Mister Mackintosh"

    Giving his name as Mackintosh, in honor of the hooded raingear he stole to make his escape from Roswell, he checks in on Halloween night, 1966. His real name is unpronounceable on Earth, to anyone but himself. And so begins his stay at the Kretcher, which will last for what may be the darkest half-century in this planet's history. He uses the time to familiarize himself with the world he's come to, and he finds there's a way out—but it's a way he refuses to take. Bitterly funny and deadly serious at the same time, this tale is deep enough for more than one reading. As a bonus, it offers a larger-than-usual role for Sybline. (And, incidentally, it gives a whole new meaning to the phrase "getting high.")


    Dahlia DeWinters, "The Adjustors"

    On a dark night, cold rain pouring down, the odds of getting a ride from a good Samaritan are already better than average, and they improve if the hitchhiker is a clean-cut, polite young man. "Thank you, Ted Bundy," Alec thinks. It's obvious pretty much from the start that he has plans for that Samaritan, as long as it turns out to be the right kind of person. When a classic car stops and he finds that the driver is a muscular, tattooed guy, Alec is about to turn down the ride. But when he sees the passenger and changes his mind, we know for sure that his plans are not good. The thing is, though, that Tucson and the beautiful Bernie are not what Alec thinks they are. And they have plans of their own. Dahlia DeWinters' story takes us once more to the Kretcher, where we witness the convergence of Alec's plans with those of the couple who picked him up, and get glimpses of an organization focused on "adjusting" people like Alec.

    Zin E. Rocklyn, "Need"

    The collection ends with a strange tale of death and undeath, love, transformation, and generation. The characters, including Sybline, seem to be engaged in an intricate dance, in and out of impenetrable patches of shadow, approaching what may be the end of a cycle and perhaps the beginning of another. I found the story both mystifying and oddly moving, a fitting conclusion.



  • Alan Lampe<span class=

    Not my typical genre, but I enjoyed these tales of horror and super natural beings staying at the Kretcher Motel in the seedy part of Atlanta. "A Devil of a Deal" and "Hollygraham" were two of my favorite stories. David O'Hanlon's introduction to Mr. Scratch and his brother could end up being a tale of any two brothers, one always trying to out do the other. Although I'm rooting for Mr. Scratch, I fear it will be awhile before he truly one-ups his brother. Sy Shanti's tale focuses on the old adage of somethings are better left unknown. I can understand the Graham's desire to know what happened in room 266. However what they discover doesn't help the situation at all. The stories are not overtly scary or horrific. Take a break and read this collection from authors all over the world.

  • Maureen

    A GREAT GROUP TOO JOIN !!

    I'm going to keep it real. I simply brought this book based solely on its dope a** cover. However don't sleep on its content either, straight from the first story this book opens up with a bang. I read the whole book in one sitting. The group members of Colors In Darkness all brought some heat, with their own unique style. Super Avid Reader Book Reviews rate this book 5 🌟's.

  • Lauren

    Gore, sex and horror. Good stuff. Hoping to one day read Sybeline's story. Come on authors--make it happen! ;)

  • Paige Johnson<span class=

    Even my grandma liked this book.

  • Merle Cuthrell

    Great read for those who like dark horror.

    Great read for those who like dark horror. How the multiple authors captured the essence of Sybline and wives it throughout was true to the character and amazing.

  • Lynn<span class=

    This is horror fiction at its best

    The anthology grabbed me with the first story and didn't let go. Ticks all the boxes. Superb world building - check. Characters that amaze - check. Suspense that builds and then crashes into you with a satisfying "Pow!" - double check. Awesomeness!

  • Katara Johnson

    13 Authors That Connect Into One

    This anthology has thirteen authors that bring originality to this suspenseful horror/paranormal collection but they all seem to connect thanks to the legendary Sybline Kretcher who even Lucifer has trouble controlling at times. Twisted creatures, struggling actresses, alternative relationships, thieves, priests, suicidal evil men, witches, fallen angels, Silicon Valley techs, traffickers, Aliens, super natural bounty hunters, and Syb's sister all know not to mess with her and even if that follow that rue there is still no guarantee they will make it out the motel alive .

  • Kerri-leigh<span class=

    This anthology contains stories based around a hotel where very bad things happen as a matter of course, and though the stories stand well enough on their own, the common character--the immortal creature who runs the hotel--ties them all together. But really, the hotel itself is a vivid and powerful character all its own, effecting more of the outcomes than any active characters on the page.

    Some of the stories are predictable, but their predictability offers a comfort as themes and premises that have been done to death in horror are given a fresh perspective the genre is sorely lacking. Even when I was unsurprised by a plot element, I was drawn into the tale because the urban Atlanta setting (in a very gritty and volatile section of the city) and the characters of iffy integrity ensured a new spin on the familiar.

    A handful of the stories are haunting, the authors clearly deserving top spots in the genre, but all of the stories are engaging and fun.