Title | : | Halloween Candy |
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ISBN | : | - |
Language | : | English |
Format Type | : | Kindle Edition |
Number of Pages | : | 19 |
Publication | : | First published June 4, 2014 |
Halloween Candy Reviews
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Four friends are out trick-or-treating the night of Halloween. As they pass by an old house, one that everyone thinks is haunted, one boy dares his friends to go in and spend 20 minutes in there. One friend accepts - and his prize will be the other three boys' candy bags. What can happen in just 20 minutes? And after?
I enjoyed this story. It has a really interesting storyline and some very creepy moments. I liked the four boys - they were written well. Unfortunately, the ending, though shocking, just wasn't enough of an ending for me. It was also rather abrupt - with a bit of cleaning up, a little more to the ending, and an editor, this could definitely be a 5 star short story. -
Review: HALLOWEEN CANDY by Lyle Perez-Tinics
This short horror story packs a powerful punch! A very unexpected (and horrific ending) wraps a story of one Halloween night gone terrifically wrong. If this was a medieval morality play, the Lessons would be: Never Accept a Dare! and Don't Enter the Haunted House!! Four unassuming twelve-year-old boys, all friends, trick-or-treating on an ordinary Halloween. What could possibly go wrong?? Excellently written--I look forward to more from this author.