Serving His Fiancée: Part Two of Feminized Fiancé (Feminized Fiancé) by Ann Michelle

Serving His Fiancée: Part Two of Feminized Fiancé (Feminized Fiancé) Reviews

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  CagedMitch

  In this sequel to Feminized Fiancé, Rick finds himself still a sissy maid in the home of Victoria Martin, but now he's forced to be a servant to Victoria's daughter Sarah, who is his own ex-fiancée.
  
  At first, Sarah doesn't know that her maid Sissy is actually Rick, or even that she is a he. When she realizes who he is, she is certain that Rick, who hasn't returned her calls, has gotten a job at the house under false pretenses, and is some kind of sick pervert who broke her heart. Not letting on that she knows, Sarah sets out to humiliate Rick and to break him. She wants to force him to admit who he is, explain what he's doing and why, and beg her to take him back, which she may or may not do.
  
  Rick doesn't know that Sarah is on to his secret. He only knows that she is surprisingly cruel to him, and he feels especially emasculated when he is made to help her prepare for a date with the handsome businessman William. Rick cringes when Sarah seems to fall for William, and is forced to serve them both at their meals. William is secretly attracted to Sissy, however, and intends to have the adorable maid on the side. Rick also discovers that William has nefarious plans involving Sarah's money and her mother's company.
  
  Rick finally reveals himself to Sarah while they are on a double date with William and Jake, someone who works for Victoria Martin's firm. They're are both beneath the table preparing to give the men blowjobs, when Rick blurts out the truth, and Sarah tells him that she already knew. She then unzips Jake's pants, and tells Rick to take out the man's dick and stroke and suck it. As Rick reluctantly sucks the man, Sarah begins stroking Rick's penis, warning him that if he should come before he makes Jake come with his mouth, she'll make him stand up and show Jake his penis. Throwing himself into the task of pleasuring Jake with his mouth, Rick succeeds just in time, and shows Sarah his mouth filled with cum, before she makes him swallow it. Then she points to her own date, William, and tells Rick to get busy. William believes he's getting a blowjob from his date, and doesn't realize that the mouth pleasuring his penis belongs to Sarah's feminized ex-fiancée, instead. Sarah, for her part, is intensely aroused at the thought of dominating and further emasculating Rick.
  
  Later, Sarah invites both William and Sissy to her room, and William penetrates her, while Rick is made to stand and watch in the purple pencil dress he wore for their double-date, holding Sarah's high heeled shoes the entire time.
  
  Throughout the story, no matter his faults, it's clear that Rick truly loves Sarah. Can he win back his fiancée, or is she lost to him forever?
  
  In the story's first part, Rick's humiliation is directed by Victoria, a woman with an agenda, and no particular feelings for Rick (other than disdaining the notion that he's good enough for her daughter). In this part of the story, Rick's emasculation is driven by Sarah, who feels that she has been wronged by him, and seeks to teach him a lesson.
  
  This second part of the story is, if anything, better than the first. I highly recommend this feminization tale.
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  BookAddict ✒ La Crimson Femme

  It stops at part two? I want more! Part too, Sarah is back and she's still waiting for Rick to answer her phone calls. When she meets Sissy, her mother's new maid, Sarah senses something is off. When she figures it out, boy is she mad.
  
  This turn in the story is good. I enjoyed this one better than the first story. It's a 3.5 for me. The characters are still straight forward. The dialog is a bit hokey but forget about all that. Focus on the humiliations of Rick. Ms. Michelle ups it a notch and it's delightfully depraved. Poor Ricky-poo doesn't know just how much his fiancee will punishment. Too bad it isn't more. She does still love him.
  
  The ending is fitting yet it makes me still want more. Since the author asked if she should continue, here's what would trip my trigger. It'd love to have another few parts. Perhaps there's the bachelorette party with a wedding and wedding night. So many things to do to Ricky for more humiliating orgasms. More body modification for him would be delightful. The bells are a nice touch. Too bad they aren't permanent, hanging from his balls. A fourth part where they go on their honeymoon would also be exciting to read, especially if each part increases in Rick's submissive pleasure as well as his enjoyment in pain. Sarah ratcheting up her cruelty and sharing Rick would also be lovely. Perhaps a fifth and final part where Rick helps his wife get pregnant by another man. Then he helps be a "nursemaid". Those are just my thoughts for some erotic sissification.
  
  This second part is good and recommended for those who enjoy a male thriving through his suffering.
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  Mindi

  A tremendous follow up / sequel to Feminized Fiancé. In this book, the humiliation is off the charts as a young man is forced to serve as his fiancée's maid. A must read for anyone into maid fetish forced feminization.
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  Fiona Piper

  Ann Michelle is one of my favorite authors. Whenever her books come out, I drop everything and read them, and I'm really glad I did with this one!
  
  Feminized Fiance was an excellent book. I thought the setup was super clever. I loved the way Rick was pulled in deeper and deeper by Victoria Martin. I thought some of its moments were wickedly brilliant in an erotic humiliation sort of way. And I was super impressed by the way Ann opened the door to the sequel, while simultaneously giving us a complete story.
  
  That sequel is Serving His Fiancee, and it's even better. Why is it better? Because, this time, Ann goes further than she normally does in terms of the characters engaging in sex, and that made this book super-hot in my opinion. The plot is, as usual, excellent and gives you an interesting story with several twists and some wonderful scenes to think about as you, uh, contemplate the book. I also thought the second book added strong details to first, such as explaining why Rick never called Sarah back. It also does something that is rare in our genre, which is it gives a happy ending. (And the potential for another sequel.)
  
  I highly recommend this book. This is one of Ann's best.
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  Zakfar Magni

  Second part surely delivers what it promises. And what a great second part of a masterpiece! If you love Femdom Forced-Feminization stories, you must read it.