The Alpha Wolf Bent Me Over by Donald Armfield

The Alpha Wolf Bent Me Over Reviews

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  karen

  
  dirrrrrty!
  
  this is a story about two 18-year-old girls who go to summer camp. what are 18-year olds doing going to summer camp when they are at the age when they have, you know, other options?
  
  "Ready for camp, bitch?" Mira asked Miranda.
  
  "Thrilled" Miranda responded with sarcasm.
  
  "Why do you like camp so much?"
  
  "The outdoors makes me wet." Mira said rubbing her finger over her crotch and then licking it.
  
  oh, it's like that. well, then, by all means, go to camp. and so they do. did i mention that these girls are twins?? and that they don't need to stray too far from the womb for sexual gratification? because - yeah, it's more twincest.
  
  Margret moved her fingers faster and faster and Mira was riding her hand. Mira screamed with ecstasy as she came to her climax. Margret licked her fingers clean and Mira gave her the biggest kiss squeezing her breast saying,
  
  "Damn i got the best sister ever"
  
  any sisters out there want to contest that title? i didn't think so. that is, truly, the best sister.
  
  so they go to camp, and they have sexual congress with all the boys. and each other. a lot.
  
  meanwhile, their friend, a relative "good girl" decides to shed that image and become more like her friends. however, she lacks a twin. what's a girl to do?
  
  fortunately, her salvation cums in the form of a campfire horror story.
  
  "Ten years ago the tale was discovered by a camp counselor trekking through the woods. He found a diary with a very hard shell buried in the dirt near an old oak tree. It told the tale of an Alpha Wolf who looked for girls in the form of a virgin. The Alpha would then kidnap the virgin and take her deep into the woods and fuck the shit out of them. The dairy that was found belonged to Raffi Garvin. The boy kept a daily entry in the hunt for his sister. The first entry was about how they came to a clearing in the woods were there was a stump that was shaped like a diamond that lied in slanted position. His sister was sitting on this rock and he was near by. He says he turned his back for a second and then saw a large Alpha Wolf running deeper into the woods with his sister cradled under his arm. Since then five girls have disappeared from these camp grounds. One of those five made it back alive but was devastated that she was raped by an Alpha Wolf."
  
  i mean, if being raped by a wolf doesn't turn you on, you are destined to be one shriveled old virgin. so our heroine dresses up like little red riding hood and takes her virgin ass to the diamond-shaped rock. and lo!! the alpha wolf appeareth! and they have sexual congress!
  
  a lot!
  
  so the moral of this story is, if you are an 18-year-old virgin at a coed summer camp, please be responsible and wait around for an alpha wolf, because at least you won't get pregnant.
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  Arthur Graham

  I don't often read much erotica, but being a lover of the written word in general and all things perverted in particular, it's actually quite surprising that I haven't read more of the stuff. Having recently picked up The Alpha Wolf Bent Me Over (free on
  Smashwords), I can't say for certain how it compares with the other smut currently on the market, but I can state with confidence that Mr. Armfield, as a writer, is just about as perverted as they come.
  
  At first I found the premise a tad absurd — 18-year-old girls at summer camp, and not as counselors — but then I considered all the hardcore fuckin' they wind up doing out there, and so I came to accept the conceit.
  
  As should be evident from the title, naturally this book involves a rapacious wolf beast having his "bad doggy" ways with various all-too-willing victims. Members of "Team Jacob" might fail to recognize their own bestiality fixation, but (unlike Meyer) Armfield makes absolutely no pretense as to the animalistic lust which seems to drive most affairs — especially those between young, nubile women and big-dicked wolf monsters.
  
  I must admit that I did find the story more humorous than titillating at points, and I'm not entirely sure how much of that was intentional, but personally I found the balance quite nice. Three chuckling chubs.
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  Richard Derus

  I can't really do justice to this read. I'm a retiree from the horrible, grim, dreary UFC cage-stage that is heterosexual sex. Awful, boring stuff. I didn't pork teenagers voluntarily when I was one, either, because teenaged girls are Trouble with a capital Ohmyfuckingawd.
  
  So a big part of the appeal of the tale sailed past me at a good clip. Armfield does manage to make the stage appealingly clever, and his credentials as a Dirty Old Man are not in any doubt.
  
  I hope that, as he does more writing in the series, he spends more effort making the transitions less herky-jerky and the descriptive passages less obtrusively tonally different from the dialogue. (Translation: Dialogue is as important as description, work on it.)
  
  For me, this is filed under Straight People Stuff and can safely be purged from my memories. So all of y'all straight people might like it very well, particularly men over 35 in long-term relationships.
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  Nefariousbig

  EDIT: I may have come across as prudish in my earlier review, so I'd like to make a few additional comments now. Some may find it surprising, but I don't read erotica. I gave that up a LOOOOOOOOOONG, long time ago when Penthouse Forum got boring and passé. A LONG time ago. I find my current reading phase very hard to describe. I like weird, gross, funny, unexpected, disgusting, filthy, nasty, mayhem, crazy, unbelievable, ridiculous, gut busting, and guts busting books. It is very difficult to keep myself entertained for very long. That's probably why I started reading anthologies. That said, I don't mind reading about naughty little sex whores using their sex to trap as many flies or wolves as they desire. Hell, who don't? And, I don't mean WHORE in a bad way. It's just the way it is sometimes. Amirite?
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  Summer camp is a magical time in a young girls life where she gets to shed parental authority and enjoy the freedom of self exploration. Apparently, this is not the summer camp I remember from my girlhood. These bitches is crazy! Even I thought these girls needed a swift and sound spanking, and not in the good way. Whores! Wow, just unbelievably whorish whores from whore island. I can't even imagine what kind of "crafts" these girls might whip up out of glue and macaroni manicotti noodles. Well, yes, I can imagine. Oh, and there's a very large Alpha male with big wood in the woods, but I probably didn't need to tell you that part.
  
  NOTE TO DONALD: Relative to his overall size, Alpha needed a much larger penis. This one may have been Alpha's cousin on his moms side. I'm just sayin'!
  
  That is all. Oh, and this:
  http://youtu.be/i9JJVn-_W2M
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  Donald Armfield

  Its my book so I can be bias. A spicy read.
  
  I get a lot of talk about this being poorly edit and blah blah. Look past that at the concept. ITS A STORY TO GIVE YOU A BONNER! A rough draft of whats to come from the Alpha Wolf Series.
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  Danni

  I don't really want to read it but the title made me lolwtf? so it had to go on my bookshelf. In fact l may need to construct a new lolwtf bookshelf especially for cases like this :-)
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  Wol-vriey

  I'm really unsure how you rate erotica. Everyone gets turned on by different sh*t, so there's no standard 'f*ck rating' you can use to judge.
  True, the plot of 'The Alpha Wolf Bent Me Over' is basic. But nobody wants complicated plots here. In this genre, the settings are simply excuses to get the characters to the nearest bedroom as quickly as possible--where the real action takes place.
  (Basic idea: Start . . . short introductory f*ck. . . interlude . . . F*ck some more . . . interlude . . . f*ck a lot more . . . etc.)
  This does that very well.
  As a MAJOR plus for the author, 'The Alpha Wolf Bent Me Over' reads very fast. Whether you like it or not, it'll be over long before you have time to become bored with it.
  Ah, just read the f*n story and get turned on if wolf cunnilingus works for you.
  
  Nuff Said.
  
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  Vicy Cross

  It was free on smashwords, and so I sat down and gave it a go.
  
  To be fair, this story is more erotica than horror, but I’m always down for smut. However I was disappointed that the Alpha Wolf played such a teensy role. The premise of the story is pretty basic: slutty step-sisters at summer camp discover urban legend about an Alpha Wolf’s insatiable lust for virgins. I was hoping to see more doggy-stalking and frothy, teen homicides in the woods, but alas. I guess there is only so much you can pack into a 3,000 word story. Anyway, the story wasn’t bad. Just not what the title advertised. The slutty stepsisters got more action from human boys than werewolves. It was a free story so I don’t feel gipped. But yeah, don’t go into it thinking you’ll see lots of carnage and beastly transformations. This isn’t that kind of story. Still, I’m glad I picked it up. 3.5 stars out of 5!
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  Jane Doe

  Not sure why everyone has twincest on this story they are step-sisters that look like twins.
  Hot little story. Would have liked to read more about the wolf, the only thing that made it sound like a "wolf" was how he drooled all over her back. Some guys do that, too. lolol
  Super fast naughty read. Will look for more by this author.
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  CD Keith

  A short read with some very kinky sex. It has to be erotic if it has girl on girl who are sisters that get gang banged by the boys at camp. There is also the virgin that wants to be taken by the alpha wolf so she goes looking for the big bad doggy.
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  Jeff O'Brien

  I've never read an erotica story before, so I'm not quite sure how to rate it. I didn't get a boner, so I guess I can't give it five stars. But I kept being interested in what would happen next, so I settled on three stars.
  
  While I was a little distracted by some editing oversights, I saw that the author has a strong story telling ability and I'd like to see future work from Mr. Armfield. But I'd recommend that he use a female pen name, because let's face it, the story would be way hotter if a chick wrote it. When I was a kid and I'd read Penthouse Forum, the stories the ladies wrote were always the strongest, in my opinion. I might have gotten a boner, or at least a half chub if I thought the story was written by a girl. Maybe there should be a sequel with more wolf and less chicks? I dunno. Like I said, this is new to me.
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  Justin

  When I heard the title I thought okay this should be interesting and indeed it was. I'm not really into Erotic fiction but my cousin wrote this and I wanted to give it a try. It's written very well and the story lives up to it's title. As I was reading I kept picturing a Friday the 13th movie waiting for the Wolf to come but he never did so that left me slightly disappointed. It's a bit graphic but hey it's gotta be for a erotic novel right? In all aspects it delivers on the erotic front and if you like a good bizarre and erotic novel then I suggest you read this book also if your look for something different this book will definitely open your eyes.
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  Ladymcbeth

  Even if the title is about an alpha wolf, I think the book is more abount twin sisters doing sex together. We only have the wolf in the 2 last pages.
  A little disapointed because I tought there was more wolf sex thing.
  details miss too in the sex scene for me.
  
  
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  Lawanna

  My cousin wrote it so I can be biased
  
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  Virginia Wade

  Love the cover and premise. It's a naughty little story about a girls' camping trip that includes an enormous and mysterious wolf. Will there be a part two?
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  Steven Shroyer

  The author and I have become quite close in the past few months. Donald and I have exchanged Kindle books and he always is ready to let me know how many points I have when I review a book for the Bizarro Brigade. When he told me about this little book I decided to check it out, last night in fact and I absolutely loved it.
  
  The plot is very simple, a young woman and a pair of slutty sisters she has befriended go to summer camp where the two sisters proceed to screw around and the young woman has an encounter that forms the title of this book.
  
  Some may say the structure of this book is too simple, that it is poorly written and too simplistic. Actually this helps serve the story better. This is not meant to be taken seriously, it is more of a send up of the prolifferation of "Monster Erotica" stories that have popped up in the wake of 50 Shades of Grey making erotica hip to read again. What few people realize is 50 Shades is a fanfic of Stephanie Meyer's garbage Twilight series with the names changed. I can write better fan fiction than E.L James can and those publishers better not make me change the names(You have a legal department for a reason, put them to work!). The aftermath of this publishing phenomenon is that now erotica is mainstream and 9 times outta 10 its really bad. Armfield's book is, to me at least, a send up of the really bad ones and it is written just like them. If you don't get the joke, stay away from this book.
  
  All in all it was a pleasure to read. There were some grammatical and style errors but supposedly there is a new version out that makes the necessary corrections. Speaking as a lover of books and not as the authors confidant, this is a fun and sassy send up that should get more attention that it is getting!
  Go ahead, pick this one up. The Alpha Wolf is waiting for you!
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  ~ Lei ~ Reading Is An Adventure ~

  The author noticed I had this in my tbr shelf and offered me a freebie code for an honest review.
  
  A quicky with two stepsisters who look alike and like to do their sexing together with each other and others and their virginal girlfriend go to summer camp. Our sisters play with all the guys and the virgin just reads until she hears the campfire tale about the Alpha Wolf who likes virgins so she sets out to find him and is found.
  
  Still grammatical quibbles but it was a quick, fun read.
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  Stephanie

  I didn't like this book. It was pretty much PWP which isn't normally what I like, but I could've overlooked this had it been better. There were way too many grammatical and spelling errors than can be overlooked, and this was beyond irritating. I can usually find something I like about any given book but with this one, I could not.
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  Rodney

  I got this book because I was intrigued and amused by the title. It was a quick read that I enjoyed. I feel that anything erotic is tough to rate, but I do feel the graphic scenes were enough to arouse most anyone with a pulse. I wish it had been a bit longer is all.